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Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 10:48 am
by gokudera08
Here is the Flickr link to the website.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/89780507@N05/8531016155/

For Changes for this site first thing I worked on was making it more organized. the next big edit was the color schemes I got very mixed reviews on them which to me I took as lets scrap it and start over so i choose an analogous blue color scheme with a teal color because i felt it both looked good and was able to represent myself which is the main goal of the project. I also left a lot of blank space because i want to add projects i do during the year to the site as i complete them. As for the typeface I used I chose Birch Std due to its large x height to help the legibility and gave it a lighter back-shadow to push it away from the background. As for the picture of me I chose to use it in the heading section place the faces to look at the main headline. Other then that i just tried to make the visual hierarchy word to draw the eye from the top to the bottom the navigation does have a rollover that turns to a lighter blue that cant be seen due to this being a jpg. Please leave any comments on improvements you would like to see bellow.

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:21 pm
by jennybreitrick
NIce....

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:37 am
by re8ecca
Wow CJ, this is very much improved. I think your new color scheme is working well, and I think you could get away with using a few more tints of your two main colors, especially for the background where the heavy reading sits. It just feels a little too dark in the middle. I also like your idea of using Birch for your headers and such, but I think I'd choose a more legible sans-serif type for your paragraph text.

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:03 pm
by Heyyou
C.J.,

I agree with Rebecca about the background color. If you tint the color you are currently using I think the contrast with the type will work much better. I really like the changes you have made since first critique. The new design is clean and easy to follow, while the blue color scheme is effective. Good Job.

Aharon

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 11:44 am
by Alexey M
I love the way of you make a layout, everything aligned and easy to go around this website.
I think you can play a bit more with color scheme, some text is kinda hard to read.

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:55 am
by I'mNicole
Heya C.J.

Very nicely redone! I'm a huge fan of your new color scheme and I think your layout is pleasing to the eye, especially if you actually create those geometric borders between the spaces for all of your future projects. I might change the body content color to black to make it more legible and change the highlight on the "GRC 175..." line to black as well. And while I do kind of like the uniformity of mirroring the picture in your header, it might be more fun to have two different pictures up there.

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 3:26 pm
by OliviasMama12
Hi C.J.! Very beautiful color scheme. The blues and blue-greens are very easy on the eyes, and I enjoy how you face imagery is focused in on your name. In regards to your name/headline- I know you said you've put a slightly lighter glow behind the letters, to set the blue letters part from the even darker blue background. But I'm thinking, might you consider pushing that glow even further- if not changing the chroma of the colors altogether? The blue title is still getting just a bit lost to me. Awesome Job!

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:34 am
by donnalouwho
Hi CJ! Love the colors! Very nice! Might be able to achieve a bit better contrast with lightening up a tad. Otherwise, I think you did a great job! :)

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 12:06 pm
by Martin5Ar
Nice design, it's very simple and easy to read. but personally I'd like to see a complementary color scheme in your design. Right now I feel your design a little bit cold.

Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:00 pm
by nunezm
Hi C.J.,

Much better! Its easy to navigate, clean and organize. I like the color choose blue, But, for the text instead of that color make the text white it would be easier to read and understand and maybe a little bigger. I also like the the layout is very symmetrically balanced VERY NICE! :D