GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

here are my 2 designs for the tmcc website. please leave your feedback below ^_^.

CJ-try reposting these..cuz I think there is something wrong with the link to them

I'm not sure how to critique these because both of them are the same with the exception of the colors. I like the idea of keeping things clean in your design. Some additional imagery would really increase the look of your roughs. I noticed some spelling errors, so you may want to use spell check to avoid those.

Heya C.J.

I'm going to ditto what Mark said, in that they're the same design with different colors. It'd be nice to see more variety and you stretching your boundaries a bit more. I'd definitely include some pictures and graphics to spruce it up, and also find a way to blend the TMCC logo better so it doesn't have that tacky white background.

Hey C.J,
Well, I do not now, your designs looks simple and similar, perhaps some images could help or some interesting crazy type in the header.

Hi CJ - These are too basic, although it does create a framework for you to start from. I will echo what has already been said -- this desperately needs images and typography.

hard to say, needs a few more elements! maybe some cool images and some contrasting typography?

Hi Cj, i think that your color choices are a little too neon. They make the design feel like you were limited to just blue and green. I would try using type that isn't the same color as the background.

um, I think blue is the better color.

I like the blue one better. Like the simplicity. Wish to see more elements, like images and stuff.