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project 3 critique!

Posted: Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:09 am
by mel_nunez
hey everyone here is my design for project 3!

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Tue Apr 30, 2013 1:51 pm
by mawpe
looks good Jose. I like the first design better, the colors and the images work well together

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 11:20 am
by re8ecca
Hi Mel - I like your first set, it has a lot good elements going for it. To justify the space on top, I suggest changing the photograph for each internal page.

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 5:02 am
by donnalouwho
Hi Mel,

I like the first set best. I'm really drawn to the circles and the colors you chose. Good luck, can't wait to see it all finished!

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 3:24 pm
by Justin Hubert
I like the first one and the second one, but I don't like the font choice on the second one. The first one is the one that I would like to see developed onto a website.

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:50 pm
by DustDjinn
concept one! The hold site flows beautifully.

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 8:55 am
by Juan Vazquez Lopez
Hey Mel,
The first set of layouts looks great...i like the circle concept...

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 10:15 am
by I'mNicole
Heya Jose.

First one, all the way! It's has great structure while still being visually appealing, so good job. I'm a little concerned about what it will look like when you have too much content for your bubbles though, so just be careful with that.

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 12:44 pm
by nunezm
Hi Jose,
The first layout is strongest. Its clean and organized. Great Job!!

Re: project 3 critique!

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:30 pm
by Alexey M
Both looks awesome, my favorite is the second one. No suggestions at all.