GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

what about this one?

I'm not getting a since of flow at all, when I look at this comp I really only see elements just placed/floating in the open space.
Missing link holders to the separate pages that will be linked into the webpage.

I believe that you're first comp you posted is your strongest of the 2 thus far.

I'm leaving retarded the first design as well... I think this just lacks something interesting. maybe change up the color scheme if you're heart is set on this one. =)

Im going to have to go with the first one. It has so much potential, cool portrait though!

Not feeling a vibe from this new one.

The second rough you posted seemed more like something you would rather pursue because it matches your style of design that I've seen, but maybe add a little more type in the second design to make it more interesting.

I like the first one, second needs more color

Nice contrast effect with the gray and black, including the picture. Don't see any project links.

Tammy-
I like the first one much more than the second. I think that the layout of this one is a little boring but maybe you can liven it up with color? Great job!

I enjoy the first one. I enjoy how your lined the text up with the bench and the grey scale works better with the background image in my opinion. You also have plenty of room to add your buttons later.