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another attempt at this.

Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 5:44 pm
by AWilburn
Joose.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 6:03 pm
by charliepecot
Great job. Your name is prominent. Your picture suits your design. I think your font and type work (IMO). Color scheme: check.

But then, again, I'm easily amused.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 6:07 pm
by c.j.jackson775
PRETTY creepy, but nice layout. I don't know if I would come back if a stumbled upon this website late at night... haha but design wise colors are good, layout is nice, prominent information is emphasized, well done.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 1:25 am
by wbenavente
I enjoy this theme alot and I like how you added a drop shadow on your boxes. It helped fill up that space between the boxes and the rabbit-man-person...THING..lol! Anyway like I said previously, great color choices and creative use of decorative text boxes. Overall, good job! :D

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 8:21 pm
by grc_175_rpereyra
nice illustration, like the colors and the layout. good job!!!!

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:21 pm
by tehgrimza
Think you just need to add a TMCC logo, you should add it as a tattoo on the rabbit, perhaps on his chest, or arm?

Looks good Allen, good stuff.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 3:18 pm
by Deitrik
I like the design, another website I don't feel needs much change. The rabbit is creepy in a cool way, and the colors really compliment eachother.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 6:19 pm
by kirin
I love the tilted boxes in the design, but the bunny scares me (just had to add that). I don't see anything wrong with the design so good job.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:41 pm
by aznpandaaa
I'm really liking the design elements you have on here. Its really cool to see you put in your own little character. Great job.

Re: another attempt at this.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:52 pm
by Instructor
Such character in this website.

Disclaimer: Understand my critique of this website is based on looking at it in a mirror as I cannot look at Denture Bunny directly.

This website has character oozing out of it, from the off center, trapezoidal boxes, to the borderline illegible font, to the bar band poster color scheme, this website wants to pick a fight with it's viewers! And it succeeds! Just a whole lot of excellent little details throughout. Just excellent work.

The only thing I would fix is the margin on the bottom of the inspirational links box and the biographical box at the bottom. And maybe ...

and maybe ...

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