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final
Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 6:05 pm
by c.j.jackson775
Here it is, the final for project 1. I tried to take some of your advice moved a few things around and cleaned it up a bit. I think it's much more fluid now and I'm pretty happy with it. Tear it UP!!!
Also...
for those of you that only speak meme
Re: final
Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 6:13 pm
by charliepecot
Dip the bottom of the "g" in the water with a ripple effect. Add "Huckleberry Finn" fishing in front of the "e" or "n". Have the top cross in "J" in Jackson overlay the "i" in "Chris".
Re: final
Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 10:39 pm
by aznpandaaa
I'm very satisfied with the final design. The small tweaking (I just realized "twerking" could be misread hahah) made a difference. I'm liking your colors and concept of the page. Many design elements pop out and make it worth seeing. Great job!
Re: final
Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:53 pm
by c.j.jackson775
Charlie your'e a genius, I'm doing the Huck Finn thing right now.....PSYCH but the rippling "g" is a great idea, thanks.
Re: final
Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 12:07 am
by wbenavente
What do I say about this design... It looks wonderful and just-- I really have nothing to nitpick about your layout or anything in particular. Your colors are wonderful and the type you chose for the header and buttons fit perfectly! Kinda thinking about the type choice for the body text though but I don't think it's a big deal. Your current one works just fine. Definitely professional looking and I get that "photobook" impression from your design (which I assume was what you're trying to get at). Great job~!
also. DAT MEME.
Re: final
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:26 pm
by tehgrimza
Looks legit bud, I wanna see what the new effects will look like after reading the comments, go go!
Re: final
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:37 pm
by kirin
I enjoy your background picture a lot. Your over all design looks good and I don't believe there is anything you need to fix. Great job!
Re: final
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 7:23 pm
by Instructor
Ooof! Another good one.
<doge>
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So hipster-y
So Walden Pond
Much Layout
Good margins
Tranquility maximum
</doge>
But seriously, this design is an excellent use of color, photography, typography, and page layout to move the eye through the design. I just want to seal it up in an artisanal mason jar and put it on my upcycled bookshelf. There's even great use of margins which a number of others in this class are struggling with. I wouldn't make too many changes to it. I think it looks good as is.
About the only thing that I can find issue with is I think it would look cleaner with the body copy in a sans serif typeface.
Other than that, it's looking good.
Re: final
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 9:44 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
This looks really great! The colors go really well together and the type you used go great with your design. The only thing I could say is it just took me s little longer to find your button links I didn't realize they were on the top right of the page, maybe make the type just a little bit bigger to help blindish people like me haha.
Re: final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:06 am
by MattShock23
I really like your page Chris, the logo and the imagery work well. My eye moves right to your upper buttons first though, maybe try moving them below the word Design? Otherwise, great page.