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Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 1:51 pm
by danistephens3
Hey everyone!
I took your advice and got rid of the blue box that enveloped the "about me" section. I have to tell you though, the background image is not a work of me or my own. This piece was done by a street artist by the name of David Walker
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http://www.artofdavidwalker.com). I just loved the piece so much that I wanted to use it as my background. I gave credit to the artist on the final design as well. I also tried to keep the solid colors to a minimum to not take away from the attention grabbing background. Hope you enjoy it! Thanks!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 2:30 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
Wow this looks really great I love the background graphic and your head shot kind of matches it so that's cool. I really like the shapes you used too. My only suggestion is to maybe change the color of "web design and publishing spring 2014" to white type instead of blue so it stands out more. Also give your paragraph some space between the HI because they look too close together. But other than those little minor things its great!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 3:03 pm
by charliepecot
It's colorful, and random, but not too random. I like it.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 3:52 pm
by Deitrik
Very awesome, I love the transparent box and that we can see the rest of the face in your design.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:04 pm
by eric_sallender
The background image is beautiful and regardless of if it's your or not, I'm glad you used it
In a sense, it kind of hypnotizes me as I stare at it. It definitely draws your eye in and keeps it for a while. Great job!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:41 pm
by eARTh2haleypw
I'm really liking the changes you have made from your preliminary work. I think the transparency of your content box is much more effective as it reveals the entire face of the girl. Such a gorgeous piece , no need to cover it. I also like the image of yourself that you added and the incorperation of various shapes around it. Very interesting. One thing I noticed that could improve the deign is to add space around your body copy. The margins are pretty tight.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:00 pm
by kamilyon
nice job
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:02 pm
by AWilburn
I think this looks really nice. I like that you're playing with the rectangular boxes surrounding your photo.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:11 pm
by grc_175_rpereyra
awesome website!!!!!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:01 pm
by aznpandaaa
I'm especially loving the artwork that is the main focus of your website. Very pleasant! Great Job!