Amy_final_post_kinda

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oasib
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Amy_final_post_kinda

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the one with the text is messed up, the text part of it, my text in photoshop is corrapt
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wbenavente
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Re: Amy_final_post_kinda

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Ooooh, I love your colors here! Like I said previously, I enjoy your fractal design a lot. You also provided the missing information on your preliminary work. Good job!

A couple of things I would suggest though is to pick a different sans serif type for your body copy and maybe take off the sandpaper texture you applied on your background to lessen the clutter?? See how it looks without the texture.
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Re: Amy_final_post_kinda

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Nicely done, Amy. This looks really cool. You've got some grammatical issues, but great job on integrating the functionality into your art.
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Re: Amy_final_post_kinda

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very nice layout. love the colors. great job

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