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Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:36 pm
by AWilburn
The website I am redesigning is http://www.lingscars.com. I'm finding it pretty challenging to do, so I decided to make it look more like its competitors, such as cars.com and autotrader.com. My goal in designing this is to keep it simple, so the customer can go directly to where they want to go and not waste time with Ling's silly pictures and phone apps.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:37 pm
by AWilburn
And unfortunately, it posted the images in reverse order. Yay.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 8:52 am
by charliepecot
I like the second one in posted order. I's a little more clear what's going on, and there's more variation between the primary and secondary page (which helps with the clarity).

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 7:27 pm
by aznpandaaa
wow... i was chosen to do the same site hahahahahah..... I like what you did here, I especially like your header, it straight forward and to the point. I like the idea of the option drop down, it will definately organize the site a lot better. So I'm kinda liking the second one.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 11:12 am
by AWilburn
The original website is insanely BAD. Thanks for your input on my revisions, and good luck with yours, AJ. Ling is the devil.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 8:09 pm
by c.j.jackson775
The first one has a nice layout. But the headlines and text elements on the right are way too big and overpowering the design. I think the layout is strong just need more content I think. Good start.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 3:13 pm
by tabasco_lynn
The second design has a humorous element to it much like the original site and is a major improvement compared to the original website... Maybe add in some ore imagery though.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 3:00 pm
by danistephens3
Allen-
I like the second one more than the first. I enjoy the the head of Ling in the header, I think that you retained a little bit of the humor from the original site which is nice. Condensing all that information would have been hard for anyone but I think that you did a good job filtering though it all. The type for me is a little too bold in places but overall, great job!

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:31 pm
by Instructor
Hm. There are elements I like about both designs here.

The first design has an interesting feel. It seems almost like a mobile site. I like the large buttonlike breakdowns of the key info on each car. The horizontal lines are a nice touch as well. Makes the site seem like a series of banners hung from a line. On the second design I like the wacky floating Ling-head in the car as well as the Union Jack background on the banner. I say combine the two. Use the layout and presentation of your first design with the wackiness of the second.

I'd also set the home page up much more as an attractor rather than "another page" in the website. Think "car ad" for your home page. Also make sure your design doesn't get as crowded or claustrophobic as your second design.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Re: Allen Wilburn Project 2 Prelim: Ling's Cars

Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 10:05 pm
by MattShock23
I like the layout with the British flag as a background container. I suppose it would help to scale things up a bit larger and possibly play with a stroke or some contrasting colors for your type in the menu bar. Good stuff so far. Juice.