GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

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This is a cool idea, would like to see the second concept though and another page to see what you would do regarding the actual content.

It's a cute design. It'd be cool if all of the images were buttons.

From what I can see right now I think it's a nice concept for a ranch website. Watch out for floating blocks of texts though. You don't want your design just floating in space unless that's what you're aiming for. I'd like to see your second and your subpage design and maybe a sample of your choice of palettes too? Good start.

I agree with the posts above, I'd have to see a more solid concept to really give effective feedback. From what I can see though I think you have the beginnings of an interesting concept with the cutouts tacked to the page with pins. I seems to lend itself to an amusing interactive page. Has great potential, looking forward to see how you handle its progression!

nice illustration, can't wait to see the finish product..

Hm. These Project Two posts seem to be "blurry cell phone picture of my pencil sketch" central. Time to revise my submission rules for future projects, I guess. So, I only see the home page of one design here. It's difficult to give proper feedback with such a small sample size, but here goes.

It looks like you've got the makings of an interesting concept here. I like the idea of the various website objects being pinned to a corkboard and having each object be a representational cutout of what it might be. I think this could go places depending on execution.

Unfortunately I can't give feedback on color, or typography, or layout, or compare and contrast it with another design. Pity.

Kami-
I think this a great idea/concept but I just can't see it all for what it is. Keep working at it!

I'm only replying because we are required. So, is your prelim the photograph?

Would look a lot cooler with some of those soft colors you enjoy using so much