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Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 4:18 pm
by wbenavente
I had difficulties programming and spent a lot of time researching solutions for this and that. Finally I can catch up with sleep.
Original website:
http://www.vividhairsalons.com
Redesigned website:
http://www.grc175.com/student/spring_20 ... b_p2_root/
Aaaaaaand this is project 1 with Project 2 link in it. I read we were supposed to post this one too so here you go. Hope I did this right too D:
http://www.grc175.com/student/spring_20 ... benavente/
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:19 am
by AWilburn
I think what you've done looks great. I like that you didn't keep the colors from the original site... that background is bad.
The only thing I can say for constructive purposes, is maybe link from project 2 to project 1? I didn't see a link for that, and it might be useful.
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 3:47 pm
by wbenavente
AWilburn wrote:I think what you've done looks great. I like that you didn't keep the colors from the original site... that background is bad.
The only thing I can say for constructive purposes, is maybe link from project 2 to project 1? I didn't see a link for that, and it might be useful.
Lol ikr? They stayed true to the "vivid" part of their name.
And thanks for pointing that out! I updated my site and added a projects page!
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:21 pm
by kamilyon
i loved what you did to it.. it looks alot more sophisticated.
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:01 pm
by c.j.jackson775
Very well done. The grid layout is good the typography is decent except on the instructor page it's a little small and hard to read. The Google map integration on the contact page is a great touch. On your homepage you might want to try and Make the Headline, aka your name, live type. Google looks for
tags first and your name should come up first for good google searching (SEO). ORRRRRR if you don't want to mess up the cool graphic you could add an <h1> tag for a subhead on your body copy saying introducing "-name-" or about "-name-" . Other than that GOOOOOOOOdddddddd!!!!!!!
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 4:54 pm
by wbenavente
c.j.jackson775 wrote:you might want to try and Make the Headline, aka your name, live type.
Oooh, got it! i'll go do something about that. Thanks chris!
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 6:25 pm
by charliepecot
Looks hot. The font on the pages with descriptions is a little small and hard to read.
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2014 8:53 pm
by aznpandaaa
I'm amazed how great it looks! I like each page and each redesign is very well done and clean. I would think that this page was done by a proffessional... well you are hehe. Great job I like everything you did! ^_^v
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2014 9:40 pm
by grc_175_rpereyra
looks awesome, very nice layout, colors are good. links all works. nice job!!!!
Re: Project 2 - Website Final
Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:11 pm
by Instructor
See, that first project is just awesome. Love the watercolor look!
Very nice work on the second as well. The gradient adds a subtile depth that gives the impression of a magnified strand of hair. The layout is clean and easy to use and I have no trouble navigating it. The website feels very professional and very "real" to me. I think it's the clean geometry of the layout that does it. That and the very well done margins and padding. I also enjoy all the little details like the social media links at the top and the copyright text at the bottom. You even used a table correctly!
My only issue is that at my monitor resolution, your type is very small. I can still read it, but only just.
Also, LOL Bing Maps!
Very nice work, indeed.