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project three concepts
Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 3:04 pm
by kamilyon
here are my concepts for project three
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:46 pm
by c.j.jackson775
I like the second design better, it's more visually appealing. The first one looks more like a night club
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 3:07 pm
by mccuske2
The 1st one looks like a night club web or something fir the night life. Like the secon d design better.
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Sat May 03, 2014 12:14 pm
by tehgrimza
KCCO! Running with whats trending I could see the 2nd one being the real deal. Like the feel, the flow, and the look of how everything comes together, roll with the 2nd style.
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 8:01 am
by wbenavente
Second design looks better!
First one does... kinda.. look like a club or something.
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 1:01 pm
by Instructor
I would discard your first design and go with your second. Your first is too muddy and the colors mismatched. I see where you were going with it, but the colors just don't scream Graphic Design to me.
The second is a very interesting composition. I really like the geometry of it. Good use of balance, margins and padding, and type. It seems easy to use and navigate. The honeycomb navigation in particular intrigues me. I like the page title in the honeycomb over on the left as well. Depending on how photos and artwork are arranged this should make a nice frame and backstop for your design.
I'm not sold on the TMCC green as the dominant color, try it with a couple of images in it to see how they go with (or clash against) the green. Then again I've hated TMCC's green ever since they've picked it so I may be biased.
I'd also check the font sizes of your buttons. You want to make sure it's uniform and that the page title on the left is a little bigger. Try making "Degrees & Certificates" two lines.
A good start. I look forward to seeing it as a real website!
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 3:21 pm
by eric_sallender
Although I love the first one, it does make me want to hit up a local club
So, I would definitely stick with the second one.
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 4:16 pm
by aznpandaaa
I had a stronger reaction to your second design. I like the creativity of the buttons and your graphic. Good use of the TMCC colors as well. I'm wondering if you could possibly position your buttons a bit different. I'm not too sure where but I feel like that could make your design that much stronger. ^-^v
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 12:50 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
I think these are both really nice designs. I really like the second design its is really original with those shapes as the buttons kind of reminds me of a bee hive and we all know Graphic students are busy bees. So that's really neat. My suggestion would just be to add some images and type.
Re: project three concepts
Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 1:17 pm
by charliepecot
No.2 - Would be cool if you could randomly change the slogans.