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project 3
Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 5:07 pm
by mccuske2
hello again
Re: project 3
Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 5:10 pm
by c.j.jackson775
I think your second layout it more interesting but there isn't enough information to critique it other than the background image is great.
Re: project 3
Posted: Sat May 03, 2014 12:09 pm
by tehgrimza
I enjoy the 2nd style, on that home page, have text say start your journey here, click now. or something along them lines, because I get the feeling as if TMCC is the gateway to your future career. Just right now it shows place holders, with very little done. But with some work, that 2nd style would look real nice.
Re: project 3
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 8:10 am
by wbenavente
I like the photography you chose for the second design so i'm going for that one. However if you're going for that color you might wanna reconsider your use of the TMCC logo. the colors are kind of clashing right now but other than that, good start!
Re: project 3
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 1:41 pm
by Instructor
Oh! It's time for some Design Blender Theaterâ„¢! It's been a while since I've seen one of these.
I think your best bet is to combine elements from your two designs. The photographic background and navigation bar at the top of your second design is pretty strong. As is your page layout on your first design. Mash 'em together. I think they'll work well. Like peanut butter and chocolate.
I'd loose the green though. It's not working. Try a white with either a drop shadow or black background glow with some hints of color. I'd also pick a more design-ish background image. The image you have in the upper left corner of your home page on the first design is a good start. Maybe have different images depending on what page you're on.
I think once they're blended and the green is removed, you'll have a nice clean design you can use to sell Graphic Design to the clueless masses!
Re: project 3
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 3:06 pm
by eric_sallender
I'm liking the second layout more as well. One thing I would change would be the color of your text. The bright green is not sitting right with me lol I love that picture though. I might have to steal it from you tomorrow
Re: project 3
Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 4:11 pm
by aznpandaaa
I do like the second one but I'm kinda confused on how the page works.... I do like it though =)... I'm wondering whether you should change the colors or maybe type to make it stronger?
Re: project 3
Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 12:42 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
I like the background image in you second design but I like your container in the first one. Maybe you can find a way to put them both together? I think that would be good. I also suggest maybe removing the pixel triangle in the top right corner.
Re: project 3
Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 1:19 pm
by charliepecot
I'm with Michael on this one. Put that 2nd background on the 1st.
Re: project 3
Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 1:46 pm
by grc_175_rpereyra
Second layout is looking good, nice background image. Good job