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Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:44 pm
by ElizabethBrass
Hi Guys,
Here are my roughs for project 3.
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 11:51 pm
by rrodriguez
Elizabeth,
I like both designs a lot. The type treatment for both are cleaver and unique. But if I HAD to chose, it would be roughs 1. The rollover idea for the home page is creative and innovative. I would want to see buttons on inside layout though. But I like the layout treatment for your inside page, from roughs 2. I don't know how you'd feel of merging to two together? But you could go with either or and it would be good. Nice start
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:55 pm
by paula_b
Hi Elizabeth! I have to go with rough 2 (I think) The green and white ones with the image of the building. I'm confused because the center picture says rough 1 but looks like rough 2. Anyway, it's a beautiful, inviting layout. Great example of the rule of thirds.
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 4:59 pm
by recordd
Hi Elizabeth!
Good Job of both of your designs! I really like the unique idea of making photos your link to the pages in rough#1 but I feel that it looks to busy. So, I am leaning more towards rough #2 which is the one with the beautiful campus images as the background and includes the white stripe and awesome branding GRC logo/page title. I think this layout is professional, simplistic, and well balanced with use of white space. I think the color scheme and typography work well together. One thing that I would suggest is to include TMCC's address info. down in the left or right corner. Nice job and I cant wait to see your final design!
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:31 pm
by lingling_chen
Hi Elizabeth
I like the typographic, layout, color on your rough2,
your rough 1 is interesting, it can be cool too: )
Good job!
Lingling
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:17 pm
by Sierragirlnv
Hi Elizabeth,
I am digging your first layout it has a repetitive affect to it that the viewer could see it was still attached to TMCC. I think the flow is nice as well as the aesthetics. I like the round affect you have given the different categories, it goes well with the font choice in the "G".
Sierragirlnv
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 2:03 pm
by georgia_novotny
Hi Elizabeth,
Good job on both your designs.
I think either one would work.
I think I like your rough 2 ideas more because of the pictures you used.
Visually they are very strong in communicating the campus.
I think you did a great job in doing that with our high desert surroundings.
Nice Job,
Georgia
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 6:43 pm
by old_man_pat
Hi Elizabeth! While both designs are strong, I lean toward rough number 1. If I understand your footnotes, the 'About' page titled 'Graphic Communications' is the inside page for rough 1, giving it a similar look to rough 2. I like the use of windows in the home page layout as a link for your inner pages. I also think the artwork as the background image for 'Gallery' works well. I look forward to seeing what you decide for your final design.
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 8:55 pm
by dboudinot
I like the top set of roughs more. They exude the clean design with which you work so well. I like the vertical column in the middle; I would just watch the balance if you end up adding other items.
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:30 pm
by kiwakom
I enjoyed both designs. Personally, I like the rough 2.
The TMCC photo is very nice. Also, I like the logo.
Good job!
Kiwako