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Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:54 pm
by TsukimizuDC
Hey guys and gals,
Cosplayer Dalanie Chester present and accounted for is here to present my roughs for Project 3.
Rough 1:
For rough #1, I went a little basic with the color design. I added a paintbrush insert on part of the design. For the instructor bio page, I moved the photos of the instructors to both sides of the box and I'm going to align the information of the instructors with the photos.
Rough 2:
For rough #2, I added our school mascot within the navigation bar. Instructor page, I zig-zagged the images and going to do the same thing with the information.
Sorry for not adding some information about the instructors, I just didn't have a clue to write down, but I hope you guys enjoy.
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:51 pm
by lingling_chen
Hi,Dalanie
I like both of your roughs. Good color, and graphic choices. Good job!
Lingling
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:29 am
by rrodriguez
Cosplayer Dalanie,
Both layouts would work for this project. But I tend to like rough 2 layout and elements better. Using TMCC mascot is a nice touch. I would maybe suggest having the mascot logo on page once, a new viewer unfamiliar with TMCC or the Graphic Communications Program might think we're infested with happy lizards or something. Your font choices are easy to read. Good start
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:13 pm
by paula_b
Hi Delanie, good job on both roughs! I find it difficult to choose one. I think I have to go with rough 1. I like the overlap of the boxes and the paintbrush. If you decide to go with rough 2, I agree that one lizard would be a better choice. The color schemes and font choices are strong in both designs. Good job girl!
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 4:27 pm
by recordd
Hi Dalanie!!
Nice job on both of your designs! I really like both of them (the typography & color schemes) but I think I'm going to go with rough #1. I really like the well-balanced layout, the paintbrush adds character, & the navigation is easy to locate. I feel the layout and content is more spaced out in this design than the other. One suggestion that I would make is to move the TMCC address info. down to the bottom of the design. I can't wait to see your final layout!
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 1:56 pm
by Sierragirlnv
Hi Dalanie,
Your roughs for project three are off to a good start. Now that we have learned transparency it might work well for your designs. I also think you might want to include one complimentary color to your design somewhere to accentuate you design better.
I think the information is displayed nicely and organized well.
Sierragirlnv
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 1:34 pm
by georgia_novotny
Hi Dalanie,
I like all of your design ideas.
I like the one with the lizard more as its more creative.
Nice Job
Georgia
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 6:39 pm
by old_man_pat
Hey Dalanie, while both would work, I find myself preferring the 2nd set of roughs. I think the white background color works better for your body copy than green. Yet, since I find I also like the brush from your first rough, may I ask if you'd consider a way to work that into your second? The mascot was a nice touch (I didn't know we had one), but I agree with Rosa that one lizard would be enough. I also like your layout for the bios in your second design as well. Overall, nice start!
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 9:09 pm
by dboudinot
Hi Dalanie,
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I like the bottom set more because I think the page is more balance. I would remove the lizard at the top that's facing left and move the other lizard over to create stronger eye-movement/sense of direction.
Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:51 pm
by kiwakom
I enjoyed both roughs.
Personally, I like rough 1.
The rough 2 is too simple to me.
But I feel I want to see more images.
Also, the copyright is too big.
Other than that, Good start.
Kiwako