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Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2015 9:42 am
by Oreo_Chaos
Here we Go.....
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 2:54 pm
by j.alexis93
I think the placement of the navigation links is working much better on this one. I would kind of like to see how it would look if you placed all the information within a column to the far right, but that's more a personal choice.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:52 pm
by Blackfïsk
I have to be honest I think the type is still too big, and I dislike it just floating there... Add a cool box, theres box shadows and bevels and all sorts of things you could do to contain text, also your links could be awesome buttons. The background is really coll though.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:23 pm
by moserary
Once again, I have to agree with Alexis. The navigation links are seen before the reason for the website. Makes it a bit confusing. Nice color choices, though with the tree image it's a bit lonely.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:59 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
I think this is awesome. I like how you mixed the imagery and type. I would suggest using a different typeface between your headline, body copy, and links. It will separate what the viewer sees and will be easier to distinguish what is what.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:54 pm
by natsukigrc175
I like the whole looking. I like your type choice too. I would just slide nav to the right to give more space between the nav and the edge.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:11 am
by nicolemae09
The contrast between your type and the background work great! I would work with using your space a little more. Right now the type kind of just looks thrown into each corner but great job so far.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:31 am
by daveryjones
One question.. Are we allowed to use an image for the background that we don't have rights to? Just curious.
I think your layout needs some work so that the hierarchy is evident.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 9:02 pm
by ravennvrmre
I really like it, maybe play with adding boxes behind the buttons to make them more obvious (you could do file looking ones like Isimgrc175) and space them out a little they seem smushed a little. Or maybe like Warren suggested play with different fonts, even if it was just a different font for the body copy (I really like the look of your font for the buttons). Great work though.
Re: Projecticus Uno Finalie (Project One Final)
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:35 am
by sierra_style
I like it, very unique looking site. The contrast is awesome and everything is easy to read. Also your email is too funny haha. What if you made your body copy line up width wise with your name to make it seem more lined up? Not sure how it would look just throwing it out there.