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Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2015 2:46 pm
by natsukigrc175
This is my final work for project1. I took out a box behind text and kept other things staying.
I'm looking forward to build an actual website with this!:)
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 2:58 pm
by j.alexis93
I really don't have much to say about this. I'm glad you didn't really changed it because I liked it just as it was. The background could be a little bit cleaner, but that's about it.
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:55 pm
by Blackfïsk
Awesome improvements, I would suggest getting rid of that crosshatching its just not needed with your minimalistic design, also using those pink/peach bars you could just wrap the whole page in a thick border, it would also highlight your minimalistic design but make it bold, because now those bars are just hanging out randomly.
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:25 pm
by moserary
Love, love love it! Very clean, bright, energetic, clever, INTERESTING! Eyecatching and memorable, nice work!
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:56 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
This is so good, I literally have nothing to say for a suggestion. Nice work
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 10:08 am
by lsimgrc175
I think this is awesome but I am wondering, what are those rectangles on the sides, and do you really need them?
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 3:37 pm
by Ka80kins
Your work in Illustartor is awesome. You put alot of time into this and Ill be a great representation of you as a website.
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:41 am
by nicolemae09
These are really neat graphics! I don't think you need the peachy boxes on the left and right side. They are kind of bulky and taking my eyes away from the rest of the design. Awesome job though!
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 9:24 am
by daveryjones
Your design is awesome. I don't have any suggestions because I think it looks great! Keep up the good work
Re: Final Critique for Project#1
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:01 am
by ravennvrmre
I loved your roughs on this design, it’s simple and yet whimsical (the pencil buildings are still one of my favorites in the design). I agree with j.alexis93 (Alexis Rosales) I’m glad you didn’t change much, there was no need. I think the background works; it has a blueprint feel to it which matches with the buildings in you design. I don’t think you really need the two vertical peachy boxes, I think the design would look fine without it, or maybe a thicker boarder like others have suggested. Having said that it’d still look good if you left it the way it is. Looks amazing and I can’t wait to see more.