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Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2015 2:56 pm
by japanese_panda
I did not do big change.

I just change the location of icons, and color a little bit

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 4:22 pm
by j.alexis93
I think toning down the blue background really helped. I think your name looks really simple, but kind of works because it's a simple design.

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:57 pm
by Blackfïsk
Its got its own style going on, that's nice. Not much to change here.

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:27 pm
by moserary
Pretty and simple-but-creative. It makes one interested enough to dig deeper to see what all you have to offer.

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:54 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
I like how simple you kept it and it really works well. I would suggest putting your logo underneath your headline and making your headline a color instead of black.

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:50 pm
by natsukigrc175
This is simple enough and I like it. I would tone down the blue background as Alexis suggests. Other than that nice work!

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:14 am
by nicolemae09
The simplicity is great. I am not sure I would know what kind of site I am looking at just from this home page. I feel like something more is needed, not quite sure what, maybe more info somewhere or something?

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:33 am
by daveryjones
I think this is looking nice. I may be hallucinating but is the pink pencil bigger than the blue pencil? Good work, Yoshiki.

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:44 am
by ravennvrmre
Your design’s simple and nice. I don’t have any suggestions for change. Looks nice

Re: Final Critique for Project 1

Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 12:50 pm
by japanese_panda
Avery

I can see the pink pencil looks bigger, but size is same.

I think it is a problem of perception. Do you think it should be same size visually? not physically?