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Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 12:39 pm
by j.alexis93
Hello everyone, this is my final design for project one.
A lot of you suggested that the body type was little too small, so I increased the size to make it more legible.
I also made sure that the space between my navigation links and my small type was fairly the same, just like Michael suggested. It doesn't seem like a big change, but little tweaks like that definitely make an improvement.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:48 pm
by Blackfïsk
Very clean and mellow, I like it. Maybe do something cooler with your buttons, you can have like a green version of the white box you made with the notch cutout and it could highlight when hovered on. Just ideas.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:21 pm
by moserary
Yep, simple, clean and quiet but gets the job done. Sounds like someone I'd want working for me, Alexis.
My two cents' worth: 1) the font size for your e-mail is so small it makes one feel like you don't really want it to be noticed/used; 2) I'm not sure "hobbie" is spelled correctly, perhaps "hobby?"
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:01 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
This is really well done. My only suggestion would be to add a footer and put your email and tmcc logo inside it at the bottom. It kind of feels like its just floating and lost right now as is.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 10:04 am
by lsimgrc175
I like the design but IMO the lines of type are too short to read. For whatever reason this class is chanting "justify your type" but I don't think it helps. Graphically it does make your text look like a cool "block," but blocks are tiring to read.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 3:43 pm
by Ka80kins
Very clean! But I think you need a picture of you in there! It would just tie everything in but its your design and whatever you choose to do will be great.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 1:01 pm
by natsukigrc175
Good choice! I like this simple looking and there is nothing left I can say actually. You might wanna make the credit and contact info bigger a bit?
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:07 am
by nicolemae09
OMG I love this! I really like the body of text down the side like that. I don't have many suggestions but the where your email is and what not may need to be just a tad bigger, I can see it being hard to read for some.
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:30 am
by daveryjones
I love this! I think it is simplistic and clean but the simplicity is handle beautifully. I always enjoy your designs. Keep up the great work!
Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:38 pm
by ravennvrmre
Your design is clean and professional. Love the green. However, I agree with rosemary your email and tmcc information is really small, I missed it the first time. Maybe make the buttons several sizes bigger and change the email/tmcc information to the size you currently have for the buttons. Or like warren suggested put them in a footer. Looks nice though.