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My Final Project One

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 6:28 pm
by papasmurf124
I chose to change the background. I'm going for confusing and slightly irritating can't wait to hear your thoughts.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:07 pm
by Blackfïsk
This is... interesting, kind of clashy you have like 5 different fonts and colors that don't follow any color scheme. Also we are not adding a search bar, that's kind of advance.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:15 pm
by j.alexis93
The header seems to be working pretty well for me, but the rest does seem kind of confusing. Don't know if you were actually joking around about that or not ha.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:49 pm
by moserary
Although busy, it is well balanced and makes sense to me. All the different images on the right seem to be buttons, are they? It would make sense to use them to dig further into what about you interests me. If you are a complex person, this suits you more than your roughs. I've seen much worse, infinitely more annoying sites, sorry!

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:39 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
This is working really well layout wise. I would suggest getting rid of the drop shadow on the subhead or making it a darker blue/ black. It doesnt match well with the color of the nav bar. I would get rid of the stroke on the body copy box as well. I don't think it is needed.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:32 pm
by natsukigrc175
I like your layout. Its very balanced and easy to navigate. I would just use darker colored text box behind your body copy, not the white one, because there is no reason to use the same color with type for the background.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:29 am
by nicolemae09
I like your background image but the colors chose for the text are kind of messing with my eyes, especially the drop shadow on your top text. Also your logo is a bit pixelated, I would find a higher res image to add in there.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:57 am
by daveryjones
I'm still seeing some serious contrast issues. I can't read any of your body copy. Also, I feel like the images on the right look like an after thought, not like they are meant to be there.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 9:51 pm
by Instructor
Here's another design that is clean and simple and is really made by it's background image. The cityscape immediately establishes a feel fro the website and informs it's color palette. The blues give it a cool urban feel and the picture makes me feel that this is a crisp evening ready for me to paint the town red.

I'm still losing the body copy in it's text box. I'm not sure white with a glow is really working there. Also, I'm not sold on the different sized navigational type. The logo could have been moved up to give it a bit of bottom margin as well. A couple too many fonts in use there as well. I probably would have gone san-serif for the whole thing.

Nice effort, sir.

Re: My Final Project One

Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:19 am
by sierra_style
I think that it is a cool image and I like the colors with it, they go well together. Maybe a little bit of contrast but you can fix that easily.