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Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2015 10:32 am
by natsukigrc175
Hello here is my link to my personal website and project2 is attached on the web.
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2015 ... index.html
On project2 website, I did "@media screen" so please enjoy different layout on narrower window size.
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:38 pm
by ravennvrmre
I absolutely love both of you designs, and it was nice to see all the inside pages for your personal website. For the website redesign, I really like the colors and the pictures you chose. Great work.
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2015 8:00 pm
by papasmurf124
Amazing layout on Mikes pastry website. I think it turned out really well. Your website turned out exceptional. I'm not sure but I think we need the TMCC logo in our webpage.
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 9:41 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
Really nice work Natsuki. I'm especially happy because I know how good Mikes Pastrys is. It's amazing how bad the original website is so bad considering this place has a line around the North end of Boston at all hours it is open. I really like your use of imagery in the newsite and the layout is spot on. I really like your homepage as well. Your illustrations are so cool
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 4:46 pm
by Instructor
Ooooh, nice work with the responsive design! Bravo Natsuki.
The wood pattern in the background immediately establishes a warm inviting feeling on this website. It looks like a cutting board and makes me think of someone kneading muffin dough. Great use of appetizing photography throughout. The navigation is easy to find and use. The brown, orange, and white color scheme is attractive and creates neat contrast with one another. Nice choice on the typography. The use of one font but different weights gives the design a strong sense of unity.
My only issue is that on some pages, the paragraphs are double spaced, while on others it's single spaced. It comes off as a little jarring sometimes.
Great work though.
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 10:03 am
by japanese_panda
I like illustration of project1 front page.
As for project2, It is easy to navigate your page! nice work!
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:12 pm
by Ka80kins
Netsuke this is awesome! Everything works and I can feel an inviting page on both websites! Awesome navigation and great color schemes! The only thing id fix is if you can put a "take me back" on your project 2 website just so it can be easier to get back to your profile.
But seriously amazing!
Re: Final Critique for Project#2
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2015 4:16 pm
by j.alexis93
These turned out great. They're simple, clean, and pleasant to look at. Everything feels cohesive and unified. They seem to be internet ready for me. Nice job.