Hi Luke!
I love both of your designs! I’m particularly fond of the second one and your use of colors against the black, it makes them really pop! I do feel the notebook is a bit out of place but it’s also really cute and I love the concept!
Have a good evening!
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- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:17 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 8
- Views: 62
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:14 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 64
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hi Shasta!
I love both of your designs they’re very cute and seem to match the personality you output in your pictures! If anything I’d try to make your header titles a bit bolder, they get a bit lost in the dark pink!
I hope you have a good evening!
I love both of your designs they’re very cute and seem to match the personality you output in your pictures! If anything I’d try to make your header titles a bit bolder, they get a bit lost in the dark pink!
I hope you have a good evening!
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 54
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hi Rebekah! I love your first design! It’s very beautiful and I think you played into the whole lavender thing very well! I do wish the buttons on the mobile version stood out against the picture though, I almost didn’t see them! I’d also try to use the space of your desktop version more and perhaps...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:09 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim DR
- Replies: 10
- Views: 40
Re: Project 1 Prelim DR
Hi Danielle! I love your designs they’re very clean and nice to look at! I can’t quite find anything to critique because I find them so enjoyable to look at! I think if anything I’d find a way to add a spot of color just to make certain aspects pop instead of limiting yourself to two colors! Have a ...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Preliminary Work
- Replies: 8
- Views: 56
Re: Project01 Preliminary Work
Hi Lucio! I love the color schemes you use! It’s so cool to see the way you keep your own consistent branding in your works! On your second design I love how clean they are but I would utilize more of the space on the screen! I think the use of space is definitely better in your first design but sti...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:01 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Proj. 01 Prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 55
Re: Proj. 01 Prelim
Hi Enastasia! I love your cat! Very cute! In your first design the blues are very nice but I think the gradient fading to a black deters from the color scheme! I would try maybe using a darker or more purple blue instead whether in a gradient or not! It would help make certain things pop more! But I...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_1_preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 48
Re: Project_1_preliminary
Hi Miguel! I love your concept with the sketchbook paper as a background, and even more with your portrait as a drawing! I do think the blue and lime combination is very hard on the eyes and doesn’t go well with the browns and the colored pencils at the bottom!
Have a good evening!
Have a good evening!
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:55 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 70
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Serena!
I love the muted colors they’re very nice and friendly! I think you should try to use up more of the space in your designs, I love your use of negative space but it can appear very empty if not used to its fullest.
Have a good evening!
I love the muted colors they’re very nice and friendly! I think you should try to use up more of the space in your designs, I love your use of negative space but it can appear very empty if not used to its fullest.
Have a good evening!
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:52 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 preliminary
- Replies: 9
- Views: 78
Re: Project01 preliminary
Hi Chloe! I really like the vibe of your designs! They have a bit of spook while also having really fun pops of color! I don’t have anything to really critique other then mentioning that I like the pop of your name in the purple them but the vibe of your forest theme and would love to see how it loo...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 48
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Hannah!
I really like your second design! It’s very pretty and eye catching! Though I think you should use the space that’s available to you instead of limiting yourself to a mobile size on a desktop screen! It’s all very clean and It’s very nice to look at!
Have a great evening!
I really like your second design! It’s very pretty and eye catching! Though I think you should use the space that’s available to you instead of limiting yourself to a mobile size on a desktop screen! It’s all very clean and It’s very nice to look at!
Have a great evening!