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by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:17 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 62

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Luke!

I love both of your designs! I’m particularly fond of the second one and your use of colors against the black, it makes them really pop! I do feel the notebook is a bit out of place but it’s also really cute and I love the concept!

Have a good evening!
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:14 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 64

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Shasta!

I love both of your designs they’re very cute and seem to match the personality you output in your pictures! If anything I’d try to make your header titles a bit bolder, they get a bit lost in the dark pink!

I hope you have a good evening!
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Prelim
Replies: 9
Views: 54

Re: Project01 Prelim

Hi Rebekah! I love your first design! It’s very beautiful and I think you played into the whole lavender thing very well! I do wish the buttons on the mobile version stood out against the picture though, I almost didn’t see them! I’d also try to use the space of your desktop version more and perhaps...
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim DR
Replies: 10
Views: 40

Re: Project 1 Prelim DR

Hi Danielle! I love your designs they’re very clean and nice to look at! I can’t quite find anything to critique because I find them so enjoyable to look at! I think if anything I’d find a way to add a spot of color just to make certain aspects pop instead of limiting yourself to two colors! Have a ...
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Preliminary Work
Replies: 8
Views: 56

Re: Project01 Preliminary Work

Hi Lucio! I love the color schemes you use! It’s so cool to see the way you keep your own consistent branding in your works! On your second design I love how clean they are but I would utilize more of the space on the screen! I think the use of space is definitely better in your first design but sti...
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:01 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Proj. 01 Prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 55

Re: Proj. 01 Prelim

Hi Enastasia! I love your cat! Very cute! In your first design the blues are very nice but I think the gradient fading to a black deters from the color scheme! I would try maybe using a darker or more purple blue instead whether in a gradient or not! It would help make certain things pop more! But I...
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project_1_preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 48

Re: Project_1_preliminary

Hi Miguel! I love your concept with the sketchbook paper as a background, and even more with your portrait as a drawing! I do think the blue and lime combination is very hard on the eyes and doesn’t go well with the browns and the colored pencils at the bottom!

Have a good evening!
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 70

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Serena!

I love the muted colors they’re very nice and friendly! I think you should try to use up more of the space in your designs, I love your use of negative space but it can appear very empty if not used to its fullest.

Have a good evening!
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 preliminary
Replies: 9
Views: 78

Re: Project01 preliminary

Hi Chloe! I really like the vibe of your designs! They have a bit of spook while also having really fun pops of color! I don’t have anything to really critique other then mentioning that I like the pop of your name in the purple them but the vibe of your forest theme and would love to see how it loo...
by Perchy
Fri Sep 20, 2024 5:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 48

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Hannah!

I really like your second design! It’s very pretty and eye catching! Though I think you should use the space that’s available to you instead of limiting yourself to a mobile size on a desktop screen! It’s all very clean and It’s very nice to look at!

Have a great evening!