Project02 Final

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rebekah_stevenson
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Project02 Final

Post by rebekah_stevenson »

Hi everyone,

I know I am late in posting this, but I still wanted to get your feedback and wanted to participate in the critique.
My website reflects the design draft I made for one project and I think it will do a great job of portraying my future work in a minimalist style.
Although there are still things that need to be done to touch up the flexibility when adjusting to mobile view, for my first website I think I did a good job of replicating my original design.

https://www.grc175.com/student/fall-202 ... stevenson/

Danielle Roberts
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Hi Rebekah,
Your website is great it's easily accessible and I can see that the toolbar works. The webpages composition is structured very well. I like that you have neutral colors to compliment your profile picture. I Honestly have no notes this is a good website.

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TylerOath
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loving the flowers in your background and did you take that headshot just for this? lol
Well done. Elegant and simple in all the right ways.
The only critique i have is it's not adjusting things when i make my window smaller. maybe that's on my end?

but other than that, I can't wait to see the finished product!
William Tyler Michel

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Lhart
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Post by Lhart »

Hello Rebekah!

Dont be anxious i love the site!

Its so much better to get it out there. The photo is very cool and matches your theme. The typeface of your name is nice and I see everything you need!
Super job
- Liam Hartman :mrgreen:
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Instructor
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Looking super clean there, Rebekah. Nervousness is perfectly fine. It means you care. Ya' done good though.

This thing really does look like your Project One. You've replicated it well. I didn't say perfectly because you have made some changes, but those changes are, by and large, improvements. Your secondary navigation is larger and better placed, your main navigation buttons look leaps and bounds better, your simplified logo goes better with your simple and clean layout, etc. And all the strengths are still there as well. Your big, beautifully textured background image shines through on the browser. The tight frame of your header and footer is still working in the browser. Your smaller image and bodycopy area is somehow even more legible on the browser and makes for a nice counterweight to your background image to bott. It's all there.

I think the serif font in your footer was a font too many. It would have looked better as different weights of the same font you used in your content area and your bodycopy. Your nav buttons still look like they have slightly uneven margins.

Nice work!
"Inspiration is for amateurs. The rest of us just show up and get to work." — Chuck Close

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Perchy
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Post by Perchy »

Hi Rebekah!

It turned out so cute I’m happy you were able to translate your design to your site so well!

Percy
Thanks,
Percy Ames

m1ggsart
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Post by m1ggsart »

Hi Rebekah
You did a great job recreating your original design. Everything looks clean and organized. I would just suggest a little bit of alignment with the font on your navigation buttons. Other than that, great job.
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shasta_the_masta
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Post by shasta_the_masta »

Rebeckah,

I love the color palette; it's so soothing. The lavender image adds a nice element of texture to the design. The design is a bit large for the viewport, but that's okay. Everything looks nice and clean.
~ Shasta Mori ~

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Post by Chloe_(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ »

Hey Rebekah, I love the look of your website, the calm gray and lavender color scheme is very calming and pleasing to the eye! It looks lovely!
Chloe Hull

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