Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

[DustDjinn]

I enjoy layout one! It does remind me of save by the bell though.

[jennybreitrick]

I really like how abstract your imagery and line work is on these! Fantastic job! So…did you use pink on this one? Hahaha-
jen

[nunezm]

Hi Aharon,
I really like your re-do it much more better and the colors are even better nice job

[campbell_mckeogh]

which one do you like?

[freem110]

I like the second layout best, well done!

[Siri]

I'm glad with the changes you've made to your first layout, as I liked that one the best, though now I worry if it might be a bit too dull after seeing the vibrancy of the colour scheme before. Maybe it's just my eyes trying to adjust to it, but otherwise I love your layout! It uses line and shape, and calls the attention easily with them without being too out there.

[Landsknecht]

definitely layout 1, and I like the updated color scheme (pink and blue just weren't strong enough college colors). excellent work.