Project 1 Roughs

[mccuske2]

I like the one you just posted last. the second one you did in black and white look nice with a little of color.

[tehgrimza]

I like the window setup still, even after looking at the revised pieces of work. The turtles setup is real nice, but the window, the clean lines, and the shapes, I like it strangely over the last revision you did.

One thing that the turtle and the window setup have is that logo color vibrance. Really pops off its background, I like that.

[charliepecot]

It's the photograph. It's just that good. Art triumphs over science. You know where I took that picture, right?

[kamilyon]

I like the second one after you revised it just be careful of your type. You want readable and script fonts are not the best readable text.. Its pretty and script is my favorite type but for your buttons you want something readable. For you quote it works really good..

[tehgrimza]

It's the photograph. It's just that good. Art triumphs over science. You know where I took that picture, right?

Right outside of 217, its a great shot man. Can't take me away from it.

[Dangerous_Preteen]

Hey, I like both designs, but I definitely think the second rough shows a little more originality. I feel like the first one is a little too on the "corporate" side - but then again, that could be your intent. I think both could be very functional web pages, but the second is my favorite due to the noticeable creativity.

Design #3 is actually my favorite my far. Didn't see it at first. Great contrast and creativity.

[Deitrik]

Charlie I really like the Design you have going on with the photo of you in it. I did see that changed the color around a bit, and I think it was a good idea. The black isn't hard on the eyes, and the texture is also very pleasing. Good job. =]

[charliepecot]

As far as "intent" goes, I don't really have one in mind. I could probably use - and probably will use - all three designs at some point in whatever context seems more appropriate. As far as the project requirements are concerned, I believe either of the three will work.

[aznpandaaa]

Hello there! I'm reli liking the professionalism in the first one. I did see the revised Design #3 and liking that one a lot btr. PLUS, you used turtles! I love it! I feel the second design is lacking in design more. Otherwise, it would be great.

[c.j.jackson775]

Charlie I'm leaning towards the first one but they both look fabulous. The first when is architecturally interesting and gives the design a sophisticated feel. I really like the flow with the angled edge pointing your eye downward into the links well done.