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by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 11:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 16
Views: 3413

Re: Project 2

I like both, but I prefer your second design! The colors are really nice and it would look really cool as a parallax website. I think you could make your menu buttons smaller on both the desktop and mobile versions. Also you could definitely come up with a unique logo for the company. :)
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 11:17 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3481

Re: project 2 prelim

These definitely convey what the website is about a lot better than the original. I prefer your layout with the brushes and paint over the red paint splatters. The red paint splatters one gives off more of a horror movie vibe to me than an art store. I like the font you used on the brushes one, sinc...
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 11:05 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: proj-02-rough-critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3149

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

I like these! Your second design is very clean, but I think your first design is the most visually interesting. The colors in your second design go together really nicely, and the main image is really cool. It looks like on your mobile version you have your script font going vertically next to the d...
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project two / agostina renaud / roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 3238

Re: project two / agostina renaud / roughs

These are a hundred times better than the original website. The original website made me die a little inside, but these are a huge contrast and I really like them. They're clean and straightforward, and it's clear what the website is about. Nice job!
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:47 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 4018

Re: project 2 roughs

These are really pretty, however I feel they're a little too close to the original designs as far as colors and background go. Maybe you could try a softer blue to go with the bridal theme. I really like the font you used on the name and I like how you used MUCH nicer photos than the original in you...
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Plastic Surgery prelim
Replies: 18
Views: 3815

Re: Project 2 Plastic Surgery prelim

Yay! Puppies! I'm loving your second design since it has really nice colors and a clean, minimalist layout. It also makes me want to look at puppies all day. My only suggestion is to align all the type on your menu in your second homepages. Nice work!
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two
Replies: 16
Views: 3740

Re: Project Two

These are a nice upgrade from the 1996 version! I prefer your first design over the other, since it's a cleaner design and I like the movie poster feel to it. I also like that Michael Jordan and Bugs Bunny aren't staring into my soul in that one. Nice job!
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:13 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelims_project_02_sjones
Replies: 17
Views: 3755

Re: prelims_project_02_sjones

These are nice! I think I prefer your second layout over the other. It's a cleaner design, and I love that Lake Tahoe graphic. I suggest using higher quality photos, especially since your photos are the main focal point of your designs. You want them looking crisp and clean like Lake Tahoe! :)
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 10:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project #2 Roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 3354

Re: Project #2 Roughs

I really like the new logo you made! I also like both of your concepts, but I prefer your first layout a bit more. On your menu in the first mobile layouts where it says "Start a relationship with Jesus" I would put 'Start' and 'a' on the same line. Hopefully that makes sense! These are de...
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 8:54 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 3276

Project 2 Roughs

Hi everyone, here are my roughs project 2. The poorly designed website I chose is https://www.doughboysreno.com. Unfortunately the quality of their donuts is not conveyed well on their website, so I tried to make it modern while still being personable. I was inspired by https://thesodashop.com/ and ...