Hi Emily,
The designs you have here are very generic. And I don't see any mobile designs. I don't really know what to say about these. Sorry, but I have no critique to offer at this time.
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- Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:30 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project03 Prelim
- Replies: 5
- Views: 38
- Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:15 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 03 Preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 34
Re: Project 03 Preliminary
Hi Breanna,
Your designs are very bright and cheery. Very cleanly done, readable and appealing. I like the designs with the mascot it seems to be a little more playful and alluring to the reader. I do however think you could spruce it up with a little more color variation.
Your designs are very bright and cheery. Very cleanly done, readable and appealing. I like the designs with the mascot it seems to be a little more playful and alluring to the reader. I do however think you could spruce it up with a little more color variation.
- Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:05 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project_3_Preliminary
- Replies: 6
- Views: 52
Re: Project_3_Preliminary
Hi Miguel,
I agree with you about using the layout with the navigation on the left, it seems to be very professional looking and laid out in a very easy to read way. I don't think it carries over well to the mobile design as it looks to me to be too cluttered and messy. Just my opinion.
I agree with you about using the layout with the navigation on the left, it seems to be very professional looking and laid out in a very easy to read way. I don't think it carries over well to the mobile design as it looks to me to be too cluttered and messy. Just my opinion.
- Mon Nov 18, 2024 4:56 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 03 Preliminary DR
- Replies: 5
- Views: 28
Re: Project 03 Preliminary DR
Hi Danielle,
I like your layouts they are very straight forward, I like the design with the lizard with the cap on. I would suggest using the darker design for the landing page and the light design for the inner pages. Just a suggestion.
I like your layouts they are very straight forward, I like the design with the lizard with the cap on. I would suggest using the darker design for the landing page and the light design for the inner pages. Just a suggestion.
- Fri Nov 15, 2024 1:38 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Work
- Replies: 6
- Views: 49
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Work
Hi Rena,
I really like your designs and you went all out and designed all 5 pages, good on you. However, in your Dark Mode, it is really hard to read. Other than that, good job.
I really like your designs and you went all out and designed all 5 pages, good on you. However, in your Dark Mode, it is really hard to read. Other than that, good job.
- Fri Nov 15, 2024 1:20 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project3-preliminary designs
- Replies: 5
- Views: 39
project3-preliminary designs
Here are my preliminary designs. For the first design, I was just going for something a little upbeat with a splash of color—no particular color palette, just randomness. I just did something a little spacey and weird for the second design. I hope y'all like them. it seems during transport I lost my...
- Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:17 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project Two
- Replies: 7
- Views: 70
Re: Project Two
Hi Shasta,
Very nice job on this site. I like the way you managed to bring your mock-up design from project1 to life in this page. The color scheme is great and I like how you carried that theme through all the pages. Great job!
Very nice job on this site. I like the way you managed to bring your mock-up design from project1 to life in this page. The color scheme is great and I like how you carried that theme through all the pages. Great job!
- Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:12 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02 final
- Replies: 8
- Views: 84
Re: Project 02 final
Hi Chloe,
Fantastic job you did on this page. everything looks really great except the body typeface I think is a little small and hard to read. Other than that, you did a great job on this looks really cool and aesthetically pleasing.
Fantastic job you did on this page. everything looks really great except the body typeface I think is a little small and hard to read. Other than that, you did a great job on this looks really cool and aesthetically pleasing.
- Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:07 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project02 Final
- Replies: 10
- Views: 99
Re: Project02 Final
Hi Emily,
Boy howdy! your design is exactly like your mock-up from project1, the colors are outrageous and the whole design just resonates creativity and fun. Have nothing ill to say about your design it is just cool.
Boy howdy! your design is exactly like your mock-up from project1, the colors are outrageous and the whole design just resonates creativity and fun. Have nothing ill to say about your design it is just cool.
- Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:00 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project Two
- Replies: 11
- Views: 86
Re: Project Two
Hi Kimberly,
I love your website, everything about it is super cool, and it is fully functional. I can find nothing to critique with your site, you went above and beyond and the finished product shows you worked hard on it. Excellent job!
I love your website, everything about it is super cool, and it is fully functional. I can find nothing to critique with your site, you went above and beyond and the finished product shows you worked hard on it. Excellent job!