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by david_wolstenholm
Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project03 Prelim
Replies: 5
Views: 38

Re: Project03 Prelim

Hi Emily,
The designs you have here are very generic. And I don't see any mobile designs. I don't really know what to say about these. Sorry, but I have no critique to offer at this time.
by david_wolstenholm
Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:15 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 03 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 34

Re: Project 03 Preliminary

Hi Breanna,
Your designs are very bright and cheery. Very cleanly done, readable and appealing. I like the designs with the mascot it seems to be a little more playful and alluring to the reader. I do however think you could spruce it up with a little more color variation.
by david_wolstenholm
Mon Nov 18, 2024 5:05 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project_3_Preliminary
Replies: 6
Views: 52

Re: Project_3_Preliminary

Hi Miguel,
I agree with you about using the layout with the navigation on the left, it seems to be very professional looking and laid out in a very easy to read way. I don't think it carries over well to the mobile design as it looks to me to be too cluttered and messy. Just my opinion.
by david_wolstenholm
Mon Nov 18, 2024 4:56 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 03 Preliminary DR
Replies: 5
Views: 28

Re: Project 03 Preliminary DR

Hi Danielle,
I like your layouts they are very straight forward, I like the design with the lizard with the cap on. I would suggest using the darker design for the landing page and the light design for the inner pages. Just a suggestion.
by david_wolstenholm
Fri Nov 15, 2024 1:38 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Work
Replies: 6
Views: 49

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Work

Hi Rena,
I really like your designs and you went all out and designed all 5 pages, good on you. However, in your Dark Mode, it is really hard to read. Other than that, good job.
by david_wolstenholm
Fri Nov 15, 2024 1:20 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project3-preliminary designs
Replies: 5
Views: 39

project3-preliminary designs

Here are my preliminary designs. For the first design, I was just going for something a little upbeat with a splash of color—no particular color palette, just randomness. I just did something a little spacey and weird for the second design. I hope y'all like them. it seems during transport I lost my...
by david_wolstenholm
Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:17 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project Two
Replies: 7
Views: 70

Re: Project Two

Hi Shasta,
Very nice job on this site. I like the way you managed to bring your mock-up design from project1 to life in this page. The color scheme is great and I like how you carried that theme through all the pages. Great job!
by david_wolstenholm
Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:12 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 final
Replies: 8
Views: 84

Re: Project 02 final

Hi Chloe,
Fantastic job you did on this page. everything looks really great except the body typeface I think is a little small and hard to read. Other than that, you did a great job on this looks really cool and aesthetically pleasing.
by david_wolstenholm
Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:07 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project02 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 99

Re: Project02 Final

Hi Emily,
Boy howdy! your design is exactly like your mock-up from project1, the colors are outrageous and the whole design just resonates creativity and fun. Have nothing ill to say about your design it is just cool.
by david_wolstenholm
Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:00 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project Two
Replies: 11
Views: 86

Re: Project Two

Hi Kimberly,
I love your website, everything about it is super cool, and it is fully functional. I can find nothing to critique with your site, you went above and beyond and the finished product shows you worked hard on it. Excellent job!