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by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique. -Tucker
Replies: 21
Views: 4171

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique. -Tucker

It seems you know where you are going with this. Idk if there is any feedback i could give. Its great.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Projetc #1 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 21
Views: 4341

Re: Projetc #1 - Preliminary Critique

I like both of them, the sleek one is sleek and the other one does what its aimming for. Although i like the first one more i think the second one is better. It uses boxes quite well. Like for the logo.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:16 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: GRC175 Project1 Preliminary critique
Replies: 19
Views: 3699

Re: GRC175 Project1 Preliminary critique

I prefer the second one over the first it seems more simple in the good way. Although, the first one is probably the best because the better images.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:10 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 3699

Re: Project 1 - Roughs

Both of them are similar and dont have either enough color or stuff within them. I can only suggest looking at other websites to see how far you can go.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:51 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website
Replies: 20
Views: 4488

Re: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website

I like the second one better than the first one, mostly because the symmetry of the boxes plays with the logo. While the first one just leaves it hanging. The second one is more open and inviting while the first one is more like a window version of the seconded one, but just with a lake.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 11:00 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One, Preliminary
Replies: 21
Views: 4212

Re: Project One, Preliminary

They are both okay, but the first one is the best. It is more welcoming and easy to read compared to the dark second one. However, i do prefer the navigation bar of the second one than the first. It looks sleek and professional, you could make your final a mix of similar ideas from these.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 10:56 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 20
Views: 3945

Re: Project 1 Prelim

I like the ice cream cone one more, it has more space that isn't used. The first one could be better if you add the paragraph about yourself above the creature thing.
by Stalksyouatnight
Wed Sep 23, 2015 10:51 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 prelim rf
Replies: 18
Views: 3295

Re: Project 1 prelim rf

The city skyline one is the one I prefer. The boxes have a neat place, and it looks cleaner. The one with the face and the boxes within it isn't a bad idea it's just if you made it look like the boxes belonged in their places it could work.
by Stalksyouatnight
Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:36 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: my final for Project one
Replies: 23
Views: 4897

Re: my final for Project one

Looks good, has an original idea with the glasses, but the overall feel is simple. I could only suggest adding something to give it more life.
by Stalksyouatnight
Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Replies: 23
Views: 4481

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1

I like the first one more, you are doing more with the space provided. The buttons are great looking and so does the site, I don't know what to suggest because it does what it does well and easy. If you went with the second one I'd suggest giving more to the eye to enjoy.